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Idea of showing process of creating and using sea water, using specially Manglara trees which needs sea water to grow. How creating ecosystem. connection between sea and disappearing lakes, and top
of them creating system.
I like how you have taken inspiration from nature and explained how it relates to your project The reference images were very helpful with this. To be honest, I found the hand drawing a bit unclear and therefore hard to understand. It would be nice to have an explanation of the process of how your project works (for example with the sun´s heat).
ResponderEliminarDespite the difficulties here is your work, I am proud of you, I know the wonderful ideas you are talking about in your video, but you should improve it to be clear for everybody, I know you will make a good final job!
ResponderEliminarFrom the video I can understand that the project is to create an ecosystem in a dome structure and that there is a clear interest in the effects of global warming with the disappearing lakes. I also think it is good that you have thought about a specific type of plant as this brings a feeling of reality to the project. However, it would have been nice if you developed the ideas using a physical model.
ResponderEliminarI really like your references. I found it very inspiring and I see that you have head full of ideas. I believe that you will develope it more and create an intresting proposition!
ResponderEliminarI like the idea of using nature as a resource to make cities a better place. there is so much diversity in nature so we just have to open our eyes and look for the inspiration in the nature instead of developing new artificial materials and polutioning the earth.
ResponderEliminarI know your ideas are nice and interesting, although they cannot be appreciate in the video. Anyway I'm sure you will improve it in the future, don't give up!
ResponderEliminarYour video is nice because we understand what you are talking about thanks to you Drawings and the picture. Maybe if I can see in begger format your drawing, I will enjoy more!
ResponderEliminarI really like your references and I think you have an idea with a lot of potential but the hand drawings are a bit confusing.
ResponderEliminarI think I understood the essence of the video and the idea is nice but I have trouble following the video and it's hard to see your drawings, making it even harder to understand what you are showing.
ResponderEliminarI had troubles to understand your porpousal because of the images of your handwork are a little confuse, but i like the concept of work with nature. I tried to work with bionic architecture before and is very special apply nature solutions tu human problems. Keep going!!
ResponderEliminarnice work Tatia, images of your drawings are not so clear please upload it when u can, great designer¡¡
ResponderEliminarBeautiful images of nature and interesting scheme of operation
ResponderEliminarThe project and the general idea is fine... but I think in the way you are 'explaining and drawing' the idea of project is getting lost. The process you are drawing by hand it's not necessary if u have a good final drawing and graphic design. I miss more 'digital' drawings or maybe more visual. Because, yeah I think it's so interesting your idea, but it's a little bit lost (and.. where's the model?)
ResponderEliminar, thank you! <3
Nice drawings and a good attempt at explaining the concept. It would be interesting to see it with a bit more clarity and expanding on your final ideas a bit!
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